Entry: Can't Remember Friday, June 24, 2005



I've seen the sun
it's brilliant splender
I've seen the stars
light up the entire sky
but i can't remember
anything more beautiful than
you in my sight.
You've taken my heart and
encompassed my mind
ever since the start
and forever more in time.

   4 comments

Nikki
June 26, 2005   01:50 PM PDT
 
aawww...i love it
Katie
June 27, 2005   12:57 AM PDT
 
:)
Sugar
July 15, 2005   01:45 PM PDT
 
I really liked this poem, the word choice was excelent..... I was touched. Thanks
carlos
January 29, 2006   08:19 PM PST
 
yea it real talk of 18th street yea but that was some straight lines u laid out

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